"Fifteen" by William stanford is a poem about a 15 year old boy saw a biker crash on seventeenth street. The narrator is speaking to his family or maybe friends and telling them about a tragic accident. The setting of the poem is on the seventeenth road which is near a bridge, Since the light of the motorcycle was illuminant on the grass the time of day is probably around noon. The speaker feels like he needs to speak out because he has just whiteness a terrible accident and he has to tell somebody about it.
In my opinion the most important line of the poem is, " I admire all that pulsing gleam, the shiny flanks, the demure where it lay". The reason why I think this line is important because you can kind of tell that there has been an accident and the vehicle has crashed onto the grass. The mood of the whole poem is probably negative, it is kind of like the feeling when you find out bad news. The poet uses imagery like it is a soldiers weapon. The poet describes the brocken head lights, light as it pulses. He calls this pulse "pulsing gleam" which means the head light is slowly dying and the shadow of the grass where the motorbike lays is slowly disappearing.
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english poems
I hate homework yes i do
i hate homework as much as you
homework sucks you life away
like a child who disobeys
i hate homework yes i do
i hate homework as much as you
why cant teachers just be nice
and give us a free sunday night
i hate homework yes i do
i hate homework as much as you.
When the sun and moon are dancing in
the sky
coconuts fall from the tree tops and
relax on the sea side
shh, listen, here the tide slowly creep
up and take the coconuts to sea
as the sun rises and baby crabs come
out of there homes
to get taught how to fish and not get
swallowed up by ones food
Oh How I love school
Oh how much I do
The smell of sweat and girls in tears
and the times when teachers give you
detentions
Oh how I love school
Oh how much I do
They gives us our lives
Oh wait no they don't
They gives us a science book on our
lives
so we can act right and maybe even
smile.
As Mr Lawrence walks
past the class room
everybody stops and pleads
for forgiveness
Time slows down as he
looks into the room
It is like he is looking straight into
our souls
As he slowly walks past
Time starts to speed up again
The teacher gets mad
And gives us detentions
for not paying attention
When I go out a night
There is always someone to fright
There is always someone to fright
Like the person reading this poem
And saying this is a bunch of sh*te
I don't like poems that much
As you can see from my list
I find them hard
And then end up messing about
Exams are very dull
As you walk into the class you can feel
the teachers eyes slowly dig into the back of your neck
They all are thinking that this will be
fun
but end up just sitting on their bum
and playing teacher tag in the halls
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